Wednesday, October 16, 2019

Literary analysis handout


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Literary Analysis
Going Beyond the Author’s Words
A literary analysis is an opinion-based type of essay that makes a point about a work of literature usually a poem or short story, though longer works and nonfiction can be used too. Typically, a literary analysis makes a point about a literary work, then supports that point by discussing the work’s literature elements (e.g. irony, symbolism, and point of view), main themes, and implied ideas that are not necessarily apparent within the literature itself.
What a Literary Analysis IS
Aliteraryanalysisisanopinion. You(thewriter)areforminganopinionaboutaliterarywork,thenpresenting that opinion (and, more importantly, supporting that opinion) in the form of an essay. Essays about literature should be written in third-person point of view, like any other analytical essay. You should come up with your own title for your paper (in other words, don’t use the same title as the work you’re analyzing), and when discussing the happenings of the literature, always use present tense, not past tense.
WRONG: The true irony of this story was when the main character died at the end even though he thought he had escaped.
RIGHT: The true irony of this story is when the main character dies at the end even though he thinks he has escaped.
Like any other opinion-based essay, a literary analysis is built around a clear thesis statement. It makes a clear point about the literature, then supports it with lesser points:
The theme of Ambrose Bierce’s story, “An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge,” is that true freedom is imaginary, and this theme is conveyed through the story’s unique point of view and through the heavy use of irony.
What a Literary Analysis is NOT
A literary analysis is not a summary. It doesn’t go in-depth about the actual events of the story or poem. Instead, it assumes that the reader is already familiar with the literature in question. A summary, on the other hand, discusses the actual story without adding anything to it. Look, for instance, at this example:
Summary (wrong): Farquhar reaches the gate to his home, but then he feels a blow to the back of his neck and sees a white light, and then the author tells the readers that Farquhar is dead.
Theabovestatementispurelysummary;there’snoanalysisinit. Thisisbecauseit’sjustastatementofwhat happens in the story. In other words, anyone who reads “An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge” will get the same information contained in the above example simply by reading the story.
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An analysis, on the other hand, goes beyond simply what is contained in the literature. It uses the literature as a starting point, using it to support an opinion. In other words, when you write a literary analysis, you must “bring something new to the table.” Usually, this involves discussing the story under the lens of the literary elements. For instance, if we analyze the story events described above, we might get something like this:
Analysis (right): Farquhar’s demise at the end of the story is the perfect example of situational irony, and the author uses this to great effect in shattering the reader’s expectations in an emotional way.
This statement is much more analytical in nature because it goes beyond what we see just in the story itself. In fact, the above statement doesn’t even mention what happens in the story; it doesn’t need to – the reader is already familiar with the story. Instead, it discusses one of the literary elements (situational irony) and explains how it is used for emotional effect. Those are inferences; they aren’t apparent in the actual text of the story but are instead supplied by the one writing the analysis.
Elements of Literature
One way to analyze literature is to closely examine its literary elements that is, the devices and ideas that make a story work. Often, these devices can be used to explain a main point. There are far too many different literary elements to discuss within the scope of a small informational resource, but here are some of the most significant.
Theme
This refers to the primary undertones of the story. If you learned Aesop’s Fables or some classic fairy tales growing up, you might have learned the “moral of the story.” In the story of the Tortoise and the Hare, for instance, the theme might be that “slow and steady wins the race.” Modern fiction, however, often involves insights on behavior, on the human condition, or on current events rather than morals, intending to evoke an internal debate for its readers.
Plot
The plot is essentially the action of the story. This is a difficult element to properly discuss in a literary analysis because it’s very easy to fall into the trap of discussing what happens in the story (which would be a summary instead of an analysis). If you’re going to discuss plot in a literary analysis, remember the cardinal rule: don’t spend time discussing things your reader would know just by reading the story. Instead, discuss how the plot supports your main point; perhaps there’s something unusual about the plot (for instance, a climax with no falling action, which the author might use to create some emotional effect). Perhaps the structure of the plot is interesting itself; many short stories, for instance, have non-linear plots that is, they use flashbacks, or they jump forward in time. In any case, consider the plot itself instead of the story events that make up the plot.
Characters
Stories are told through characters, and indeed, a character study can be a strong literary analysis in its own right. However, as with the other elements, it’s important not to let a character analysis turn into a summary. If you’re going to write a character analysis, don’t focus on what the characters do. Instead, focus on what the characters are, or what they represent. Almost any literary character fits into one of three roles:
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  •   Protagonist: A leading character, often characterized as the “hero” or the “good guy” (though this can be misleading, as the protagonist is not necessarily good or heroic). The protagonist is, simply put, the main character (or group of characters) of the story.
  •   Antagonist: Basically, the opponent or adversary of the protagonist, sometimes called the “villain” or “bad guy” (but as with the protagonist, this can be misleading; the antagonist may not be bad or villainous).
  •   Catalyst: A character who is neither clearly a protagonist nor antagonist, yet still plays an important role in moving the action of the story forward.
    Characters often have related roles, too. One of the best examples of this (very useful in a character analysis) is the concept of a foil. A foil is a character who acts as a counterpart to another by exhibiting many of the opposite character traits for example, Sherlock Holmes and John Watson from Sir Arthur Conan Doyle’s classic detective stories. Holmes is reclusive, hyper-observant, and slightly eccentric, whereas Watson is outgoing and worldly-wise but tends to miss small details.
    Narrative (Point of View)
    Every work of fiction has a narrator. When you read a story, you may not be conscious of the narrator’s existence, but narrative is what makes a story. The narrative is simply the words of the story. However, a story can be told from many possible perspectives. The point of view of the story is simply the perspective from which the narrative is given. There are several common points of view for literature.
  •   Third person limited: In a third-person limited story, the narrative follows a single character at any given time. We (the readers) see the actions of the story from a perspective that is centered on this character, but is told by an unseen narrator (not by the character himself or herself that is, the pronouns I and me will not be present except in dialogue). We also are privy to this character’s thoughts and emotions, but not the thoughts and emotions of other characters. The focal character may change throughout the story, but there will only be one focal character at any particular time. A good example of this is George R.R. Martin’s popular fantasy story, A Game of Thrones; each chapter of this book follows a different focal character, but the entire work is told in this third-person limited point of view.
  •   Third person omniscient: The third-person omniscient narrator is, quite simply, speaking from a god- like perspective that is, the narrative is told from a point of view that is disconnected from the characters but sees all. The omniscient narrator describes not just the thoughts and emotions of a single character, but of all the characters. This point of view was quite common in the literature of the late 1800s and early 1900s, but has become less popular in modern works. Some good examples of stories in this point of view are Ernest Hemingway’s The Old Man and the Sea and Charles Dickens’s A Tale of Two Cities.
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o Third person objective: This perspective is essentially the opposite of third-person omniscient in that instead of seeing all of the characters’ thoughts, we don’t see any thoughts or emotions only actions. In other words, the narrative is told in much the same way as a reporter might describe the events of a news story. A good example of this perspective can be found in the Bible: the events of the Gospel of Mark (the second book of the New Testament) are told from this point of view.
First person: In first person point of view, the narrator is physically present as one of the characters of the story. Here, we see the story as told by one of its characters (as one might read a journal or memoir), so pronouns like I and me are present.
Even though these are the most common perspectives in literature, some stories are told from unusual or unconventional points of view. For instance, C.S. Lewis’s Screwtape Letters is written from second-person point of view: the narrator tells the story as a series of letters written to another character using second-person pronouns like you and your.
Sometimes a story may take a common point of view but use an interesting narrative technique. One good example of this is the concept of the unreliable narrator, common in the stories of Edgar Allan Poe (perhaps most notably in “The Tell-Tale Heart”), where the first-person narrative has a skewed perspective on reality. Other writers may expose some of the meta-story (that is, the technique and motivation behind the narrative) by breaking an invisible barrier known in literature as the fourth wall the barrier between the characters and the audience. A good example of this can be found in Charlotte Brontë’s novel Jane Eyre, in which the narrator of the story (written in first-person) directly addresses the reader: “A new chapter in a novel is something like a new scene in a play; and when I draw up the curtain this time, reader, you must fancy you see a room...”
Irony
One of the most common plot devices in literature is irony. Quite simply put, irony is anything contrary to expectation. This concept is simple, but because it is often the key element of interest in a short story, it can make for a very comprehensive literary analysis. Irony can appear in many ways and on multiple levels in the telling of a story. The entire story can be an exercise in irony, or it may contain examples of irony throughout the story (or, both things can be true). Most irony can be classified as one of three types:
  •   Situational irony: This is the most common type of irony in literature; situational irony occurs in a story when there is a marked difference between what is expected and what happens. L. Frank Baum’s enduring story of The Wizard of Oz is, in fact, built around situational irony: the four main characters go on a long, perilous journey to obtain the things they want most, only to discover they have had those things all along.
  •   Verbal irony: This is when a character says one thing but means or does something else. This could refer to sarcasm (for instance, a character who comes in out of a blizzard, rolls his eyes, and mockingly says, “My, what lovely weather we’re having!”), but often it simply refers to a character acting in a manner that doesn’t match what he or she says. For example, in the classic movie Casablanca, Rick
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(the protagonist) says multiple times, “I stick my neck out for nobody,” yet throughout the story, he is
seen making gestures and taking risks for the sake of others.
Dramatic irony: This refers to a disconnect between a character’s knowledge and the audience’s
knowledge. In other words, dramatic irony is when the audience knows something that a character doesn’t know. A good example can be found in William Shakespeare’s tragedy, Romeo and Juliet: Juliet has taken a sleeping draught to make herself appear dead to her family. The audience is aware that she is not actually dead, but Romeo (her forbidden lover) finds her before news can reach him, and he commits suicide, thinking that she is truly dead.
Tone
The tone of a story is created by the attitudes of the narrative, often supported by the words and actions of the story’s characters. Basically, it is the style of the story’s voice. This can be used to great effect to create empathy between the reader and the characters. In Mark Twain’s short story, “The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calaveras County,” we (the readers) are able to feel the frustrations of the main character (who is also the narrator) in the ironic tone that he creates as he relates the events of the story. The main character is asked to inquire after another character’s childhood friend named Leonidas Smiley. He describes, “I have a lurking suspicion that Leonidas W. Smiley is a myth ... and he [the character who made the initial request to the narrator] would go to work and bore me to death with some exasperating reminiscence of him as long and tedious as it should be useless to me. If that was the design, it succeeded.” Through the ironic tone, which in this case is derived primarily from word choice (known as diction) and syntax (the structure and style of the sentence a long, unbroken monologue), we can feel the frustration of the narrator as social graces force him to stand and listen to a story that he finds quite boring. In addition to diction and syntax, tone can also be created through imagery (the appeal to sight and other senses), language (for instance, figurative language such as similes and metaphors), and the author’s selection of details (you may have learned this formula for analyzing tone as “DIDLS” – diction, imagery, details, language, and syntax).
Setting
Every story has some sort of setting. The setting is basically (or even literally, in the case of a play) the stage where the action of the story happens. Setting refers chiefly to where and when a story’s events take place. For instance, the setting of Conan Doyle’s Sherlock Holmes stories is Victorian England – that is, England during the time when Queen Victoria reigned (the late 1800s). However, it’s important to remember that simply identifying the setting isn’t good enough for a literary analysis; there has to be analysis of the setting. How does the setting illustrate the theme of the story? How does the author use the setting to control the tone? There are many different ways to analyze the setting.
Purpose of a Literary Analysis
Ultimately, the literary analysis is a work of opinion. When you write a literary analysis, you’re not writing a summary or even an explanation of the story. Instead, you are “taking the story apart” and looking beyond the text of the story itself. When you write a literary analysis, you should not focus on what the story is, but instead focus on what makes the story work. Look at the elements that make up the story, and see beyond the simple paper and ink that drive it.
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Tuesday, September 24, 2019

IQ reading presentation



Sign-up for a set of chapters from IQ. Be sure to make a note of the presentation date and chapter numbers you signed up for.


_______________________________                                  _____________________________
Chapter and page numbers                                                      Presentation date
           
Read the chapters you will be analyzing carefully. You will be presenting your analysis in class along with two to four of your classmates. The class will be counting on you to be on top of the chapters you are covering, so please be prepared!

To prepare your written analysis, answer the questions below for the chapters you are covering.
You may hand in your analysis typed or neatly handwritten (but you must upload your analysis to Canvas). Please double-space!



3.     This novel has been praised for its vivid characterization of a wide variety of characters. Choose a minor character (not Isaiah, Dodson, or Marcus) from your chapters and identify some of the important details the author uses to characterize him or her. Explain how the details you chose help bring the character to life.
4.    Discuss a scene in which Isaiah uses his brain to figure something out. Breakdown Isaiah’s use of careful observation and logical reasoning
5.    What are the themes (the central idea or ideas) that the chapters explore? Remember, a theme is more than a topic (e.g. love, death, family, etc.). Think of a theme as a general observation or truth that is revealed about a topic, such as “Love makes us behave irrationally.” Briefly explain how each theme is realized (1-2 sentences per theme).
6.    Choose a significant quote. Copy the quote and cite it. Explain what you think it means and why you think it is significant.


 You will be graded primarily on the quality of your written analysis, although outstanding presentations will be rewarded. You will not be penalized for giving a poor presentation, but you must present your analysis! No written analyses will be accepted without a presentation. If you are absent or unprepared on the day your presentation is scheduled, you will receive a zero for the assignment with no possibility of making it up.

Monday, September 23, 2019

Essay how-to


How to Write My Division or Analysis Essay
Alison O'Neil Updated July 20, 2017
            No matter how much you know and how many good ideas you have, you will only get a really good grade when you know how to write a good essay. Division or analysis essays break a big idea down into smaller parts. They are commonly used in high school and college, particularly as part of literature courses. Once you understand the basic structure of this kind of essay, writing them will become much easier.
            Create a thesis for your essay. This is the idea you will break apart and analyze. Do not make your thesis too complicated. You should be able to write it in one sentence.
            Plan your essay. For a division or analysis essay, you should be able to divide your idea into smaller parts and analyze each one. Each part should relate to your central thesis and support the point that you will argue throughout the essay.
            Write your introduction. This should be only a few sentences long and must contain your thesis. If you are writing about a piece of literature, include the title and the name of the author. Provide an outline of the kinds of information you will use to support your argument. Your introduction should act like a signpost, explaining to the reader the direction your essay will take.
            Write the main body of your essay. Each paragraph will develop one of the points that supports the thesis. Begin each paragraph with a topic sentence stating the idea you will cover. Provide evidence and explanation to support your point, and analyze in detail. In the final sentence of the paragraph, link the point to your thesis sentence.
            Support your ideas with quotes from the text if you are completing a literary analysis. Secondary sources may also be required. Check with your teacher to find out what he expects.
            Write your conclusion. This should summarize your ideas and convince the reader that your argument is right. Re-iterate your thesis and avoid including any new information in your conclusion.

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Monday, September 16, 2019

Sunday, August 25, 2019

Example of descriptive essay


Serena Reno
Amano-Tompkins
English 100
LAX: An Assault on the Senses
Aren’t vacations exciting? Packing and setting the alarm a day before already gets me anxious. I lay in bed thinking: What will Hawaii look like? What will there be for me to taste or touch? I wonder if I can actually smell the exotic flowers in the air. Is there traffic like there is in LA? Or is it calm, silent, and peaceful? Before I can even experience all my thoughts, I have to go through LAX airport: the place where all the aspects of my senses get tested first.
LAX airport was crowded and busy even before I entered it. Right when I exited the 105 freeway, I immediately saw the huge LAX sign. Off the sides, I saw the enormous poles that lit up at night. When I first entered terminal one, there were already people in their cars trying to find parking. Buses, taxis, and shuttles were dropping and picking up people, while others were running around trying to find a cart to put their luggage in. Every forty- five seconds, I could see an airplane the size of the Titanic, flying above my head. Inside the terminals were lines for people to check in. In addition to the check-in point, there were conveyor belts, baggage claims, gift shops, and a massive board posting flight schedules. The most overwhelming sight to see was the TSA area. (This is where x-ray scans take place before going into the gates.) Additionally, I saw all types of people waiting for their flights. There were soldiers, business men and women, families with children running and playing around, and I even saw flight attendants. My eyes never rested because of the rate of movement in LAX airport.
There were so many things going on that it was impossible to avoid all the raucous noise that went on inside the terminals. The screeching tires and honking vehicles rang an annoying bell in my ears. But that was nothing compared to the shaking ground and the “rooooooom” from the airplanes taking off. Then there was the intercom voice: “Flight 609, now boarding. Last call, flight 609 now boarding.” Somehow, the intercom voice was the most soothing voice because it meant that vacation was getting nearer. On the other hand, crying babies and screaming children were the most disturbing sound that ever encountered my ears. Their mothers were screaming at them, “Matthew! Stop running around!” and some mothers were singing their babies to sleep. On top of that, the dogs jogged around sniffing, and of course, barking at certain luggage. It seemed like peace and quiet ran away to get married and never came back.
Not only were there so many sights to see and so much noise to listen to, the touch and smell changed all around me. I smelled the smoke from vehicles and cigarettes in the hands of air polluters. As people walked by me, their cologne and perfume charged up my nose. However, the aroma of coffee and McDonald’s food brought a smile to my face. Besides all the different smells in the air, I was able to feel the coldness from the air conditioner. The chill in the terminals made the handles on the luggage carts cold. Beyond the ghostly chill, the leather seats were smooth but warm from the many bodies that sat on them. However, the experience was not over until I passed the overly crowded lines, which lead to the plane. It was not impossible to feel hot and musty between the people in line.
In retrospect, LAX airport touched all the aspects of my senses. I was able to see so many sights of such vehicles, airplanes, terminals, and people. In addition, I was able to hear screeching tires, honking vehicles, and even families yelling at each other. Moreover, I smelled smoke from machines and humans, and I also got to feel the welcoming chill from the air conditioner. In spite of LAX airport being busy, it was still possible for me to see, hear, smell, and touch every dimension of the airport.



Prompt: Descriptive essay

Prompt: Descriptive Essay

Essay 1: Descriptive Essay (Observation of a Public Place)

To complete this assignment, you must observe a public place for at least 20 minutes.  You can observe a store, a restaurant, a park, a mall, a government office, a specific area of the college campus or any other area open to and frequented by the public. You will write a descriptive essay of the place you observe. (Do not attempt to use a memory of a past experience. To succeed on this essay, you need to write about an observation you do specifically for this assignment.)

Observation of a Public Place
When you conduct your observation, notice the people who inhabit the place you have chosen. Who are they? Why are they there? What do they look like? What are they doing? How do they behave? Do they seem happy, nervous, hopeful, frustrated, cheerful, bored? As you observe your public place, pay attention to the physical environment. What does it look like? What does it sound like? How does it affect the people in it?
Be sure to take notes as you conduct your observation. In addition to recording your overall impressions, write down as many specifics and sensory details as you can. Try to connect details that you observe to the impressions they create. 

Outline
Once you have completed your observation, define the dominant impression of the place you observed that you want to convey to your reader. Write a working thesis statement that expresses your dominant impression. Identify three to four main points that you will use to support your thesis. Make sure you have enough specifics and details to discuss for each supporting point. (five points)

First Draft
Write a draft of your descriptive essay. Your draft should include (1) a clear introduction that specifies the location of your observation and contains your thesis statement; (2) three or four body paragraphs, consisting of specific, detailed description; (3) and a concluding paragraph. You may type or neatly handwrite your draft. Please double-space (skip every other line). (5 points)
Final Draft (90 points)                          
Revise your draft, taking into consideration feedback you received in the draft workshop.


Essay guidelines
-Your final draft should be at least two full pages long and have at least five paragraphs.
-Your essay should contain an explicit thesis statement that expresses the dominant impression of your observation that you are trying to convey in your essay.
-Support your thesis statement with evidence in the form of specific, concrete details from your observation. If your body paragraphs do not support your thesis, make an adjustment.
-Begin each body paragraph with a topic sentence that expresses the main point of the paragraph.
-You may use the first-person voice (but you don’t have to).
-Please title your essay!
-Format your final draft in MLA style (see Formatting handout).
Complete this form to create your outline for Essay 1…


Tentative title for your essay: ________________________________

I. Introduction
Thesis statement: ______________________________________________________________


Your thesis statement should be a complete sentence that (1) identifies the location of your observation and (2) expresses your point of view on the location. Note: The thesis statement need not be the first sentence of your essay. A good place for the thesis is usually the last sentence of your introductory paragraph.

II. Supporting point 1: _____________________________________________________
Try to express your point in a complete sentence that can serve as a topic sentence for the paragraph.
List specifics and details that you plan to use to develop your point.
A.    _______________________________________________________
B.    _______________________________________________________
C.    _______________________________________________________
D.    _______________________________________________________

III. Supporting point 2: _____________________________________________________

A.    _______________________________________________________
B.    _______________________________________________________
C.    _______________________________________________________
D.    _______________________________________________________

IV. Supporting point 3: _____________________________________________________

A.    _______________________________________________________
B.    _______________________________________________________
C.    _______________________________________________________
D.    _______________________________________________________

Reading analysis: IQ

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Reading analysis (non-fiction)


Guidelines for Reading Analysis Presentations (Non-fiction)

You must sign-up for at least five presentations this semester. Make a note of the article titles and presentation dates that you sign up for below.
You will be presenting your analysis in class along with two to five of your classmates. The class will be counting on you to be on top of the article you are covering, so please be prepared!

To receive credit for this assignment, you must participate in the presentation of your analysis. You will be graded primarily on your written analysis (breakdown of scoring below), but outstanding presentations will be rewarded.

Read the article you will be analyzing carefully. If possible, read it twice. On your first reading, just try to identify the main idea(s) and get a feel for the writer’s approach and the flow of the piece. On your second reading, go over the text more carefully; notice how the writer constructs his or her argument. You will probably want to mark up your text and/or take notes.

To prepare your written analysis:
Identify the author’s name and the title of the article. Answer the following questions. Put your answers in outline form (see sample analysis on the reverse side of this sheet).

1.     What is the central claim (or thesis) of the selection? Your answer should be a complete sentence in your own words (not a quote!). Be as specific as possible, but remember that your claim should cover the whole article.

2.     Is the central claim expressed explicitly or implicitly? The claim is explicit if the writer spells out what it is. The claim is implicit if the writer only implies the claim but does not state it outright.

3.     What reasons link the evidence to the claim? In other words, why does the evidence support the claim? Reasons may be presented explicitly or implied.

4.     What evidence does the writer present to support his or her claim? Specify and categorize the evidence (e.g. examples, personal experiences, analogy, authoritative opinion, facts, statistical data, cause-effect reasoning, results of scientific experiments, comparison, interviews, etc. – see sample on back). Do not answer this question with detailed quotes or paraphrases from the article!

5.     Comment briefly on the persuasiveness of the article by answering one or more of the following questions.  
·       Is the argument convincing? Does it rely on emotional, ethical, and/or logical appeals?
·       Are there flaws in the reasoning of the argument? Does it rely on questionable sources? 
·       Does understanding the argument require knowledge of the historical or cultural context in which it was written?
·       How do the style, organization, and/or tone contribute or detract from the persuasiveness of the argument?
·       What is your personal reaction to the article?

6.     Write a discussion question to ask the class about the article. The best questions will stimulate interesting discussion about the issues raised in the article. You may also ask questions that “test” your classmates’ recall and understanding of the article.




The essentials: Syllabus

English 100
Intermediate Reading and Composition

Instructor: Tommy Amano-Tompkins                                                            Fall 2019
Sections 0198 – MW 1:00-2:25 pm; Lab 2:30-3:05 pm                Location: NEA 109
Office hours: Mon. Noon-12:30 pm
Office phone:  no phone
Email: amanott@lahc.edu (best way to communicate with me outside of class)
Class Website≈eng100H19.blogspot.com
This class prepares students for academic reading, critical thinking, and writing expected in transfer and associate-degree classes. Students plan, draft, revise, and edit compositions based on college-level readings that cover topics that challenge students' thinking and provide an intellectual background for the assignments. This course prepares students for English 101.
Student Learning Outcomes:
Students who successfully complete English 100 will be able to
1. Take charge of reading and apply strategies to unlock the meaning from texts, including:
- identifying passages that are causing difficulty to comprehension;
- developing strategies to work through difficult passages;
- identifying and correcting reading miscues;
- understanding such text features as structure, transitions, captions, graphs, charts;
2. Read actively and critically, and effectively use textual annotation;
3. Distinguish fact from opinion;
4. Identify and discuss abstract concepts found in readings;
5. Form and explain legitimate inferences from specific data;
6. Synthesize ideas and information to develop her/his own viewpoints on a topic;
7. Organize ideas clearly and effectively in writing;
8. Formulate a controlling idea to focus writing;
9. Support each point with adequate and varied evidence;
10. Follow basic manuscript and research format;   
11. Tailor writing to address a specific audience;
12. Develop sentences to relate and emphasize ideas and then detect and correct major mechanical and grammatical errors.

Students with Disabilities
Students with disabilities, whether physical, learning, or psychological, who believe that they may need accommodations in this class, are encouraged to contact the staff at Special Programs & Services as soon as possible to ensure that such accommodations are implemented in a timely manner.

Required texts:         (available at the campus bookstore)
I.Q. by Joe Ide - ISBN-13: 978-0316267731
Rules for Writers (seventh edition) by Diana Hacker – ISBN 0-312-64736-0
You will need all of the above books to pass this class!
Bring your books, a notebook (or notebook paper), and a pen to every class meeting. You will also need to purchase three blue books for the two in-class essays and the final exam.

Students who succeed in English 100 usually choose to             **Read carefully!**

  • Make a serious commitment to succeeding in this class.
  • Come to class on time and prepared.
  • Get the required texts as soon as possible.
  • Do all the assignments, including readings, and keep up with the class schedule.
  • Participate in class discussions and activities.
  • Refrain from using their cell phones during class.
  • Let me know immediately if they experience a problem with the class or if other areas of their lives seriously interfere with their ability to do their class work.
  • Seek out all legitimate help with their course work, if you need it, including the Writing Lab, tutoring, campus librarians, your textbook, and me.
·       Maintain academic integrity by doing their own work. They do not plagiarize; they do not cheat. (See box on plagiarism below.)
  • Treat classmates and instructor with respect and consideration.
  • Recognize that real learning is difficult – it involves making mistakes and taking risks.
If you are not willing to make these choices, you are not likely to pass this class!
I will be happy to meet with you to discuss your work in this course. I encourage you to visit me during office hours, but if that is not convenient for you, we can make an appointment to meet at another time.
All students are expected to abide by the Standards of Student Conduct detailed in the Course Catalog.
Plagiarism can mean copying, word for word, all or part of something someone else has written and turning it in with your name on it. Plagiarism also includes using your own words to express someone else’s ideas without crediting the source of those ideas and reusing your own papers written for another class.
Plagiarism is a very serious form of academic misconduct. It’s both lying and stealing, and it’s a waste of time for students and teachers. College and departmental policy on plagiarism will be strictly enforced: Any student caught plagiarizing will automatically receive a zero for that assignment, with no possibility of making it up, and may be subject to up to a formal reprimand and/or suspension.
Cite your sources! Please retain all notes and drafts of your papers until grading for the course is completed.
Email: All email communications from the college (including those from your instructors) will be directed to your LACCD student email account, so you are strongly urged to check it regularly.
Course site: Eng100H19.blogspot.com
A reference Web site for this course is available at the URL above. The site primarily contains information that we cover in class, such as due dates and requirements for specific assignments. Occasionally, I will post links to online readings or other resources that may be useful to the class. Downloadable handouts will be available on the Downloadable Documents page, so if you miss or lose a class handout, you’ll be able to find it here. 
Attendance/Tardiness
Attendance in class is mandatory. This is the college policy. If a student is absent for more than the hours that a class meets per week, or if there is irregular attendance or a pattern of absences, the instructor has sufficient cause to drop a student from the class. For example, if a course meets 3 hours a week, then a student is allowed a maximum of 3 absences. Students who enter the class after the official starting time will be marked absent for that particular day.
If a student is absent the first and/or second class meeting of the first week of the semester, then the student will be dropped from the class. If you are absent three classes in a row, I will assume you intend to drop the class.
Electronic Communication Devices Policy
According to Communications Division policy, electronic communication devices must remain off during class time. 
Grading:         Your final grade in this class will be computed as follows.
Essays (3)                                                                                            30%     300
Reading presentations (each student does 5)                      20%    200
Research project                                                                                  10%  100
Journal                                                                                     10%  100
Midterm exam                                                                         7%    70
Homework/participation                                                                      10%  100
Final exam                                                                                           7%    70
Quizzes                                                                                                6%    60

Quizzes cannot be made up. If you are late with an essay you must notify your teacher in advance; you will lose 10 points if you are late with an assignment, and you have one week to turn in a late assignment. Missing assignments can significantly impact your grade and prevent you from passing the course. It is the student’s responsibility to make sure that the paper is received and readable.
Revising: You may revise one or both of the first two essays and resubmit your work for re-grading. Your grade may be raised a maximum of 10 percentage points. However, to improve your grade, you will need to do more than correct grammatical errors and reword or reorder a few phrases. Revision means a new vision; it means looking at your work with fresh eyes and reconsidering the content, focus, and organization of your essay. It may involve rethinking, as well as rewriting. Revised essays are due within one week of receiving your original essay back and must be accompanied by your original graded essay and a cover letter explaining what changes you made and why. Late essays may not be resubmitted for regarding. Please do not revise and resubmit essays that receive a score of 90% or higher.
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Date
Lesson Topic(s)
Homework & class preparation to complete before class
    R4W = Rules for Writers
***IMPORTANT: For exercises from Rules for Writers, turn in answers to numbered questions only. Answers to lettered questions can be found in the back of the book. ***
Quizzes, exams, and major assignments


Week 1

Mon. 8/27
Introduction
Welcome
Syllabus
Journal: why are you here?
Diagnostic writing
Wed. 8/29
Reading Critically
Close reading: “Girl,” by Jamaica Kincaid http://www.saginaw-twp.k12.mi.us/view/8490.pdf

 “Sixteen,” by Charlie Spence http://english52s2016.blogspot.com/2016/01/sixteen-by-charlie-spence.html
Read prompt descriptive essay (do observation over the long weekend)

Diagnostic grammar test

(reading analysis)
Prompt essay 1


Week 2

Mon. 9/2

Essay Structure

LABOR DAY HOLIDAY– NO CLASS
Wed. 9/4
“Instead of Jail, Court Fines to Fit the Wallet,” by Tina Rosenberg https://opinionator.blogs.nytimes.com/2015/10/09/scaling-fines-to-what-offenders-can-pay/
R4W: Parts of speech, pp. 368-80
R4W - Exercises 46-1, pp. 368-9; Ex. 46-2, p. 371; & Ex. 46-3, pp. 373-4
***IMPORTANT: For exercises from Rules for Writers, turn in answers to numbered questions only. Answers to lettered questions can be found in the back of the book. ***
Week 3
Mon. 9/9
Writing Process
“A Brother’s Murder,” by Brent Staples
 R4W: Sentence fragments, pp. 180-8
Written homework: R4W - Exercises 19-1, p. 187 & Ex. 19-2, pp. 187-8
*** Last day to drop class with no “W” & with no fee owed is Feb. 19 (in person) and Feb. 22 (online)
Brainstorm essay 1
Wed. 9/11
Description
 R4W: Run-on sentences, pp. 188-93
Written homework: R4W - Ex. 20-1, pp. 193-4 & Ex. 20-2, pp. 194-5
Outline of Essay 1
Week 4
Mon. 9/16
Example

R4W: Subordinate word groups, pp. 389-98
Written homework: Ex. 48-1, p. 391; Ex. 48-2, p. 394; & Ex. 48-3, pp. 397-8
Quiz







Wed. 9/18
Example

R4W: Subject-verb agreement, pp. 196-205 & Sentence Types, pp. 398-400
Written homework: Ex. 21-1, p. 206; 21-2, pp. 206-7; & Ex. 49-1, p. 400
Draft of Essay 1 
 

Week 5
Mon. 9/23           
Division or Analysis

Breaking things into manageable parts:

R4W: Pronoun-antecedent agreement, pp. 207-16
Written homework: Ex. 22-1, pp. 211-2 & 23-1, p. 216

Essay 1 due

Wed. 9/25
Comparison & Contrast
IQ: read prologues and chapter 1 (p. 3-40)
R4W: Comma, sections 32a-d, pp. 292-7
Written homework: Ex. 32-1, p. 294, Ex. 32-2, pp. 294-5; & Ex. 32-3, p. 297

Begin reading IQ



Week 6

 

Mon. 9/30

Cause & Effect
Read IQ; chapt. 2 (p. 41-54)
R4W: Comma, sections 32-e-j, pp. 302-7
Unnecessary commas, pp. 308-13
Written homework: Ex. 32-5, pp. 302; Ex. 32-6, p. 307; & Ex. 33-1, p. 313

Wed. 10/2
IQ: chapt. 3-4 (p. 55-89)
Rules for Writers: Semicolon, pp. 314-7; Colon, pp. 319-20
Written homework: Ex. 34-1, pp. 317-8; Ex. 34-2, p. 318; & Ex. 35-1, pp. 320-1
 

Week 7
Mon. 10/7

Read IQ; chapt. 5-6 (p. 55-88)
R4W: Apostrophe, pp. 321-4; Quotation marks, pp. 326-31; End punctuation, pp. 333-5
Written homework: Ex. 36-1, p. 325; Ex. 37-1, pp. 331-2
 
Wed. 10/9
Grammar Review
IQ: chapt. 7-8 (p. 119-134)
R4W: Numbers, pp. 345-7; Italics, pp. 347-9; Capital letters, pp. 362-6
Written homework: Ex. 41-1, pp. 346-7; Ex 42-1. pp. 349-50; & Ex. 45-1, pp. 365-6

 

 



Week 8

 

Mon. 10/14
Midterm
Study for midterm!

Midterm exam

Wed.  10/16
Research
Read IQ: chapt. 9-11 (p. 135-169)
Reading groups
Character maps



Week 9

Mon. 10/21
Research & Documenting Sources
What is a literary analysis?
Read "Elements of Literature section of handout (through characters)
Read IQ: 12-14 (p. 170-217)
 Prompt essay 2
Wed. 10/23
Read IQ: chapt. 15-17 (p. 218-264)
R4W: Other punctuation marks, pp. 335-9; Parallelism, pp. 116-8; Needed words, pp. 119-23
Written homework: Ex. 39-1; pp. 339-40; Ex. 9-1, p. 119 & Ex. 10-1, p. 123
Brainstorm essay 2
Brainstorm essay 2












Week 10

Mon. 10/28
Documenting Sources
Read IQ: chapter 18-end (p.265-end)
R4W: Shifts, pp. 135-9
Written HW: Ex. 13-3, pp. 139-40 & Ex. 13-4, pp. 140-1
Outline essay 2
Outline essay 2
Wed. 10/30
Literary Analysis

more outline


Week 11


Mon. 11/4

Homeless series #1


rough draft essay 2 due

Wed. 11/6
Prep for the research projcct
Research project prompt etc

more rough draft

research project


Week 12


Mon. 11/11

VETERANS DAY HOLIDAY – NO CLASS

 

 

Wed. 11/13
MLA format

essay 2 due



Week 13


Mon. 11/18

8
R4W: Misplaced & dangling modifiers, pp. 127-34
Written homework: Ex. 12-1, pp. 130-1 & 12-2, p. 134

Wed. 11/20
R4W: Active verbs, pp. 112-5 & Mixed construct., pp. 123-6
Written homework: Ex. 8-1, p. 115; Ex. 11-1, pp. 126-7

 



Week 14


Mon. 11/25

Literary Analysis
Homeless series #4


Wed. 11/27
In-class essay
In-class essay


Week 15


Mon. 12/2
Literary Analysis

Research project


Wed. 12/4
Final Review

Research project

Journal due

Journal due


Finals Week


Mon. 12/9

Final exam


Wed. 12/13